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When our friends went to the mountains north of here, they swam in the cool water of hidden lakes, canoed down rivers, took photographs of some spectacular birds, hiked through forests, and slept in their tents at night.
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When my friend went to the mountain north of here, he swam in the cool water of a hidden lake, canoed down the river, took a photograph of a spectacular bird, hiked through the forest, and slept in his tent at night.
When my friend went to the mountain north of here, she swam in the cool waters of the hidden lake, canoed down the river, took a photo of a spectacular bird, hiked through the forest and slept in her tent for several nights.
Well done, FernL!
And, Jasmine, good job noticing that "water" can be made plural in this context!
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