The silver, new, shiney car was drove by Tim and I when we had gone to Western Canada seeing the Rocky mountains and some of tourist traps along the Highway; but we seen little wild animals and not a single bear: however the wild flowers had been blossoming.
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Tim and I drove the silver, new, shiny car when we went to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains and some of the tourist traps along the highway. We saw little wild animals but not a single bear, however the wild flowers were blossoming.
Good try, Rebecca! But there are still some errors to be found. I will post the full solution soon!
When Tim and I went to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains, and some of the tourist traps along the highway, we drove a shiny new silver car. We saw blossoming wildflowers but few wild animals and not a single bear.
Tim and I drove the silver new shiny car when we were going to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains and some of the tourist traps along the highway. Though, We saw blossoming wild flowers and few wild animals; we didn't see even a single bear.
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