Friday, February 15, 2013

ALL CHANGE! Feb. 15th, 2013

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

The weather channel unhappily forecast heavy snow in Europe last month.

Changes: #1 Subject noun      #2  Direct object noun         #3 Indirect object noun          
#4 Adjective               #5 Adverb          #6 Verb name                  #7 Verb tense

Please number the change you make and make only one change at a time.

19 comments:

Unknown said...

1. Subject noun:

The weather network unhappily forecast heavy snow in Europe last month.

Brittany Semkowich ENGL155 said...

2. Direct object noun:

The weather network unhappily forecast heavy fog in Europe last month.

Unknown said...

3. Indirect object noun


The weather network unhappily forecast heavy fog in Toronto last month.

Sarah A said...

#4. Adjective

The weather network unhappily forecast thick fog in Toronto a month earlier.

Anonymous said...

Robert S said
#5. Adverb

The weather network sadly forecast thick fog in Toronto a month earlier

maryannth said...

# 6 verb name

The weather network sadly predicted thick fog in Toronto a month earlier.

Beatrice L said...

#7 Verb Tense

The weather network had sadly predicted thick for in Toronto a month earlier.

KirstenS said...

#1. Subject noun:

The weather man had sadly predicted thick fog in Toronto a month earlier.

Beatrice L said...

Correction for my sentence
#7 Verb Tense

The weather network had sadly predicted thick fog in Toronto a month earlier.

Alesha B said...

#2
The weather man had sadly predicted thick haze in Toronto a month earlier.

Veronica Baig said...

ANDREW: yes!
BRITTANY:yes!
ALYCIA:yes!
SARAH:yes!
ROBERT:yes!
MARY ANN:yes!
BEATRICE:good:-)
KIRSTEN:yes!
ALESHA:yes!

Serena R (ENG 155) said...

#3

The weather man had sadly predicted thick haze in Edmonton a month earlier.


Alesha B said...

The weather man had sadly predicted dense haze in Edmonton a month earlier.

Alesha B said...

Sorry, I forgot to add #4
The weather man had sadly predicted dense haze in Edmonton a month earlier.

Veronica Baig said...

SERENA:yes!
ALESHA:yes!

leslieB155 said...

#5

The weather man had miserably predicted dense haze in Edmonton a month earlier.

Veronica Baig said...

LESLIE: yes!

Alesha B said...

#6
The weather man had miserably presaged dense haze in Edmonton a month earlier.

Veronica Baig said...

ALESHA:yes!