Tuesday, March 19, 2013

ALL CHANGE! March 19th, 2013

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make and number the change you make.
 
My younger sister gleefully received flowers for her birthday.

Changes: #1 Subject noun      #2  Direct object noun        #3 Indirect object noun         
 #4 Adjective               #5 Adverb       #6 Verb name              #7 Verb tense

28 comments:

Grace H said...

#1 Subject noun

My older cousin gleefully received flowers for her birthday.

Unknown said...

2. Direct object noun

My older cousin gleefully received blossoms for her birthday.

Beatrice L said...

3.Indirect Object Noun
My older cousin gleefully received blossoms for her anniversary.

LeslieB155 said...

#4 Adjective

My forgetful cousin gleefully received blossoms for her anniversary.

maryannth1 said...

#5 adverb
My forgetful cousin joyfully received blossoms for her anniversary.

lisayak7 said...

#6. Verb name

My forgetful cousin joyfully accepted blossoms for her anniversary.

Unknown said...

#7 Verb Tense

My forgetful cousin joyfully accepts blossoms for her anniversary.

Veronica Baig said...

GRACE:yes!
ANDREW:yes!
BEATRICE:yes!
LESLIE:yes!
MARY ANN:yes!
LISA: yes!
ALYCIA: yes!

LeslieB155 said...

#1 My forgetful mother joyfully accepts blossoms for her anniversary.

maryannth1 said...

#2 My forgetful mother joyfully accepts kisses for her anniversary

LeighaM said...

3. Indirect Object Noun

My forgetful mother joyfully accepts kisses for her graduation.

Sarah A said...

#4. Adjective

My oblivious mother joyfully accepts kisses for her graduation.

Alesha B said...

#5
My oblivious mother happily accepts kisses for her graduation.

JeanneL155 said...

My successful mother happily accepts kissess for her graduation.

JeanneL155 said...

Addendum: #4 adjective

Veronica Baig said...

LESLIE:yes!
MARY ANN:yes!
LEIGHA:yes!
SARAH:yes!
ALESHA:yes!
JEANNE: You needed to make change #6--the verb name;-)

JeanneL155 said...

Thank you, Veronica.

#6
My oblivious mother happily exchanged kissess for her graduation.

Vivien said...

#7
My oblivious mother had happily exchanged kisses for her graduation

Alesha B said...

#1
My oblivious sister had happily exchanged kisses for her graduation

Veronica Baig said...

JEANNE:yes!
VIVIEN: yes!
ALESHA:yes!

Serena R (Eng 155) said...

#2

My oblivious sister had happily exchanged hugs for her graduation.

Alesha B said...

My oblivious sister had happily exchanged hugs for her promotion.

BrittanySemkowichENGL155 said...

#4- Adjective

My assiduous sister had happily exchanged hugs for her promotion.

Alesha B said...

#5
My assiduous sister had gladly exchanged hugs for her promotion.

Stephanie said...

#6
My assiduous sister had gladly accepted hugs for her promotion.

Veronica Baig said...

SERENA:yes!
ALESHA:yes!
BRITTANY:yes!
ALESHA:yes!
STEPHANIE: yes!

Alesha B said...

#7
My assiduous sister gladly accepts hugs for her promotion

Veronica Baig said...

ALESHA: yes!