Studying on my own pace is a lot of benefit for me do to I am not needing to be worrying about no time for attend class. Being a single parent, the classes allows me working and studying and to spend time with my children.
1. Preposition
usage: the wording is “studying at” not “studying on”.
2. Wording:
“a lot of benefit” is not idiomatic; use “beneficial”.
3. Word
confusion: Although they sound the same, do not confuse “do to” with “due to”.
Either replace this connective with a different one, or use “due to the fact
that …”.
4. Verb
form/tense: with a negative verb form, use the auxiliary verb “do”; also note
that for something that is generally true, use the simple present tense. The
verb phrase then becomes “do not need”.
5. Infinitive:
the correct form of the following infinitive is “to worry”.
6. Double
negative: There is already a negative form with the verb, and in English, a
double negative means the opposite (becomes a positive), so omit the second
negative “no”. Replace it with “having”.
7. Preposition
usage: While “time for something” is correct, when there is a verb, the usage
is “time to do (attend) something (class).
8. Word
confusion: Here you need the preposition “to” not the adverb “too”.
9. Word
usage: “never minding “ is not idiomatic; use “without regard” or “without
worrying about”.
10. Word
confusion: “Whether” is a word to do with choice; in this sentence the noun
“weather”, as related to climate, is needed.
11. Dangling
modifier: What is the subject of “being a single parent”? The next clause
starts with the subject “the classes”, but that’s not the subject for the
previous phrase—you have to supply a subject: e.g. As I am a …
12. Subject-verb
agreement: The plural “classes” requires a plural verb “allow.”
13. Gerund/infinitive:
in this context, use the infinitives “to work” and “to study.”
14. Parallel
structure: With infinitives in place, use parallel structure to simplify the
clause: …to work, study, and spend time… .
Possible
Answer: Studying at my own pace is
beneficial to me as I do not need to worry about having time to attend class or
travelling to and from class without regard for the weather. As I am a single
parent, the classes allow me to work, study and spend time with my children.
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