Sentence 1: Many people in Canada are looking forward to spring.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter.
Sentence 3:This winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country.
2 comments:
Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter; with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country, many people in Canada are looking forward to spring as this winter has seemed longer than most,
Good try, krisla.
But I don't think the semi-colon is really justified.
I think we can bring out the logic of the connection with just a couple conjunctions:
Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter, and this winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country, so many people in Canada are looking forward to spring.
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