Sentence 1: Canada
Sentence 2: The fireworks display was spectacular, but it started very late because of the long daylight hours.
Sentence 2: The fireworks display was spectacular, but it started very late because of the long daylight hours.
Sentence 3: The July 1st holiday was a great way to start the new month.
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The July 1st holiday was a great way to start the new month even if Canada Day fell on a Tuesday this year, still, the fireworks display was spectacular, but it started very late because of the long daylight hours.
Good try, krisla, but you have a comma splice at "still".
Here is a possibility:
The July 1st Canada Day holiday, which fell on a Tuesday this year, was a great way to start the new month, and the fireworks display was spectacular -- though it started very late because of the long daylight hours.
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