Sentence 1: The children were clamouring to see Santa Clause at the mall.
Sentence 2: The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers.
Sentence 3: The line to see Santa was very long.
Thursday, November 13, 2014
*SENTENCE COMBINATION*
Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important writing skill. There are many ways to do this. Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: The children were clamouring to see Santa Clause at the mall.
Sentence 2: The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers.
Sentence 3: The line to see Santa was very long.
Sentence 1: The children were clamouring to see Santa Clause at the mall.
Sentence 2: The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers.
Sentence 3: The line to see Santa was very long.
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3 comments:
The mall was crowed with Christmas shopper and a long line of children were clamouring to see Santa Clause.
The children were clamoring to see Santa Clause at the mall however the mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers and the line to see Santa was very long.
Well done!
But, Sarah, watch out for the typos.
And, Andrew, watch your punctuation. As it stands, your sentence is a run-on.
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