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Last night, a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets when I was sleeping. A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets; therefore, today everybody is wearing warm clothes.
Sentence 1. A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets of downtown Toronto.Sentence 2. This morning a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.Sentence 3. Everyone is getting excited because a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.
Sentence 1: Add a Phrase-This morning, a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.Sentence 2: Add a dependent clause-While I was working a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.Sentence 3: Add an independent clause-Today is a snow day because a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.
Sentence 1.A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets and covered the roads with shimmering light.Sentence 2.A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets while Santa was travelling to the village.Sentence 3.A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets after my husband had finished shoveling the driveway.
Well done!But, Jeferson, your second and third sentences do not have the required clauses.Sofia, your first sentence adds a clause rather than a phrase, and your third sentence adds a dependent clause.
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Last night, a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.
A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets when I was sleeping.
A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets; therefore, today everybody is wearing warm clothes.
Sentence 1. A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets of downtown Toronto.
Sentence 2. This morning a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.
Sentence 3. Everyone is getting excited because a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.
Sentence 1: Add a Phrase-
This morning, a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.
Sentence 2: Add a dependent clause-
While I was working a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.
Sentence 3: Add an independent clause-
Today is a snow day because a gentle snow fell on the quiet streets.
Sentence 1.
A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets and covered the roads with shimmering light.
Sentence 2.
A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets while Santa was travelling to the village.
Sentence 3.
A gentle snow fell on the quiet streets after my husband had finished shoveling the driveway.
Well done!
But, Jeferson, your second and third sentences do not have the required clauses.
Sofia, your first sentence adds a clause rather than a phrase, and your third sentence adds a dependent clause.
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