Sentence 1: The Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants.
Sentence 2: Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties.
Sentence 3: The loans help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
Sentence 3: The loans help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
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Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties; the Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants to help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
The immigration Access Fund provides loans to help pay the costs associated with accreditation,training,or upgrading for many immigrant professionals who find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties.
Good effort, alidap. But see Annie's response for an example of how you can fully integrate the different sentences. Good work, Annie!
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