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While the other boys and girls knocked on doors and asked for treats this Halloween, my neighbours' children stayed at home because their parents did not believe it was appropriate for them to participate in a pagan festival that celebrated death and the occult.
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While a boy and a girl knocked on doors and asked for treats this Halloween, my neighbour's child stayed at home because his/her parent did not believe it was appropriate for him/her to participate in a pagan festival that celebrated death and the occult.
While the other boy and girl knocked on the door and asked for a treat this Halloween, my neighbour's child stayed at home because his parent did not believe it was appropriate for him to participate in pagan festivals that celebrate deaths and occults.
While the other boy and girl knocked on the door and asked for a treat this Halloween, my neighbor's son stayed at home because his mother did not believe it was appropriate for him to participate in a pagan festival that celebrated death and the occult.
While the other boy and girl knocked on the door and asked for a treat this Halloween, my neighbour's child stayed at home because her parent did not believe it was appropriate for her to participate in a pagan festivals that celebrate deaths and the occults.
While a child knocked on a door and asked for a treat this Halloween, my neighbour's child stayed at home because her parent did not believe it was appropriate for her to participate in pagan festivals that celebrated deaths and the occult.
Good try, everyone. But I think Jocelyn's answer comes closest.
Note that "death" probably shouldn't be made plural, and "occult" definitely shouldn't be.
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