Sentence 1: The children were clamouring to see Santa Clause at the mall.
Sentence 2: The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers.
Sentence 3: The line to see Santa was very long.
Sentence 2: The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers.
Sentence 3: The line to see Santa was very long.
5 comments:
The children were clamouring to see Santa Clause at the mall, which was crowded with Christmas shoppers, but the line to see Santa was very long.
The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers, whose children were in a long line, clamouring to see Santa Clause.
The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers and children,who were all clamouring in a very long line to see Santa Clause.
Good try, everyone.
Here is another possibility:
The children were clamouring to see Santa Clause, but the mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers, and the line to see Santa was very long.
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