Thursday, April 4, 2013

ALL CHANGE! April 4th, 2013

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make and number the change you make.

My young nephews greedily ate the chocolate eggs on Easter.

Changes: #1 Subject noun      #2  Direct object noun        #3 Indirect object noun        
 #4 Adjective               #5 Adverb       #6 Verb name              #7 Verb tense

17 comments:

Unknown said...

1. Subject noun

My young siblings greedily ate the chocolate eggs on Easter.

maryannth1 said...

2. Object Noun:

My young siblings greedily ate the chocolate bunnies on Easter.

LeslieB155 said...

My young siblings greedily ate the chocolate bunnies on Sunday.

Anonymous said...

Robert said

My Young siblings greedily ate the Ham on Easter.

LeighaM said...

5. Adverb:

My young siblings happily ate the Ham on Easter.

Jeffrey155 said...

5. Verb:

My young siblings happily cook the Ham on Easter.

Veronica Baig said...

ANDREW:yes!
MARY ANN:yes!
LESLIE:yes!
ROBERT:You've not changed the adjective and changed the direct object instead:-(
LEIGHA: yes!
JEFFREY: yes!
NEXT STUDENT: PLEASE MAKE CHANGE #7.

maryannth1 said...

7. verb tense
My young siblings happily cooked the ham on Easter

LeslieB155 said...

#1 subject noun
My young daughters happily cooked the ham on Easter.

Unknown said...

#2 Direct object noun

My young daughters happily cooked the ham on Easter.

Serena R (ENG 155) said...

1.Subject Noun

My young sisters happily cooked the ham on Easter.

Veronica Baig said...

MARY ANN: yes!
LESLIE: yes!
ALYCIA: I can't see that you changed anything;-)
SERENA: yes!

Nicole H said...

#3 Direct Object Noun

My young sisters happily cooked the turkey on Easter.

Vivien said...

#4 Adjective

My inconsiderate young nephews greedily ate the chocolate eggs on Easter.

Unknown said...

#3 Indirect object noun

My young sisters happily cooked the turkey on Thanksgiving.

Veronica Baig said...

NICOLE: yes!
VIVIEN: You needed to make the adjective change to Nicole's sentence;-)
ALYCIA: yes!

Anonymous said...

My talented young sisters happily cooked the turkey on Easter.