Thursday, May 16, 2013

ALL CHANGE! May 16th, 2013

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make. Please number the change that you make.

Amber happily planted the beautiful flowers in the garden.

Changes:  1. subject noun         2. direct object noun                3. indirect object noun                       
4. adjective(s)       5. adverb(s)         6. verb name           7. verb tense

14 comments:

Unknown said...

1. Subject noun

Jessica happily planted the beautiful flowers in the garden.

Grace H said...

2. direct object noun

Jessica happily planted the beautiful tulips in the garden.

LeighaM said...

1. Indirect object noun

Jessica happily planted the beautiful tulips in the pot.

JoelF155 said...

4. Adjective(s)

Jessica joyfully planted the lovely tulips in the pot.

Nicole H said...

5. Adverb(s)
Jessica gayfully planted the lovely tulips in the pot.

Unknown said...

6. Verb name

Jessica joyfully placed the lovely tulips in the pot.

In the original sentence, happily is the adverb. Gayfully is not a word.

Veronica Baig said...

ANDREW:yes!
GRACE:yes!
LEIGHA:yes!
JOEL: yes!
NICOLE:yes, you changed the adverb, but I think you've coined a new word there!
JOHN: yes!

Grace H said...

7. verb tense

Jessica joyfully places the lovely tulips in the pot.

Brittany Semkowich ENGL155 said...

1. Subject noun

Martha Stewart joyfully places the lovely tulips in the pot.

Jocelyn B said...

2. Direct object noun...
Martha Stewart joyfully places the lovely daisies in the pot.

Vivien said...

4. Adjectives
The talented Martha Stewart joyfully placed the lovely daisies in the beautiful flower pot

Veronica Baig said...

GRACE: yes!
BRITTANY: Yes!
JOCELYN: yes!
VIVIEN: Yes--but what happened to change #3??

Anonymous said...

Robert S said.

5. Adverbs

The disgraced Martha Stewart delicately placed the withered daisies in the humble flower pot.

Veronica Baig said...

ROBERT:Yes, you changed the adverb--you also changed a number of adverbs;-)