Thursday, May 16, 2013

GRAMMAR QUESTION, May 16th, 2013

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

Please ask her where is she going over the week-end and is her boyfriend going to but don't tell her that I ask for the informations.

There are many possible ways to correct this sentence--many possible bonus marks!

16 comments:

Ashleigh H said...

Can you find out for me where Miranda is going this weekend; moreover, if her boyfriend is accompanying her. Please don't tell her I asked for this information.

Grace H said...

Can you please ask her where she is going over the weekend, and if her boyfriend is going with her? However, please don't tell her that it was me who asked for the information.

LeighaM said...

Would you please ask Sally where she is going over the weekend, and if her boyfriend will be joining her; please don’t tell her I am asking for this information as I would like to surprise her with a visit.

joelF155 said...

Please ask her where she is going over the weekend and if her boyfriend is going too, but don’t tell her that I asked for the information.

Nicole H said...

Please ask her where she is going over the week-end, and is her boyfriend going? But don't tell her that I ask.

Shade Adedokun. said...

Could you please ask her where she is going over the weekend and also if her boyfriend will be going with her, and please don't let her know I asked for the information.

Veronica Baig said...

ASHLEIGH:Please check the punctuation;-)
GRACE:Almost--there's a punctuation error;-)
LEIGHA: Don't add extra information--and check the punctuation;-)
JOEL: A good solution:-)
NICOLE: Can you check your verb tenses and punctuation?
SHADE: That's also a good solution:-)

Grace H said...

Can you please ask her where she is going over the weekend and if her boyfriend is going with her? However, please don't tell her that it was me who asked for the information.

LeighaM said...

Would you please ask her where she is going over the weekend and if her boyfriend will be joining her, but please don’t tell her that I asked for this information.

Jocelyn B said...

Without telling her that I am inquiring, could you please ask her where she is going this weekend and if her boyfriend is going as well?

vivien said...

Please ask her where she is going over the weekend and whether her boyfriend is going too; but don’t let her know I asked for this information.

Veronica Baig said...

GRACE: Thanks!
LEIGHA: That's it!
JOCELYN: Nicely done:-)
VIVIEN: Almost--check the punctuation;-)

Anonymous said...

Robert S said.

Please ask her where she is going over the week-end? Is her boyfriend going with her? Please don't tell her that I ask for the information.

Veronica Baig said...

ROBERT: A good solution:-)

Laurie M said...

Please ask her where she is going for the weekend, and whether or not her boyfriend is going with her; however, do not tell her that I asked.

Veronica Baig said...

LAURIE: A good solution:-)