Friday, January 17, 2014

*GRAMMAR QUESTION*

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

The silver, new, shiny car was drove by Tim and I when we  had gone to Western Canada seeing the Rocky mountains and some of tourist traps along the Highway; but we seen little wild animals and not a single bear: however the wild flowers had been blossoming.

Solutions will be posted in the next edition of the blog.

7 comments:

Sarahba50 (155) said...

The shiny, new, silver car was driven by Tim and myself when we went to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains and some tourist traps along the highway. We saw few wild animals and not a single bear; however, the wildflowers were blossoming!

MarshaR (Eng 155) said...

The shiny, new silver car was driven by Tim and I when we went to Western Canada, to see the Rocky Mountains and some tourist traps along the highway. We saw few wild animals and not a single bear; however, the wild flowers were blossoming.

Unknown said...

The new, shiny silver car was driven by Tim and me when we had gone to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains and some tourist traps along the highway. We saw very few wild animals and not a single bear; however, the wild flowers were blossoming.

Roland said...

The silver, new, and shinny car was driven by Tim and I when we went to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains. Some tourists was trapped on the highway. While traveling, we seen little animals and not a single bear; however, the wild flowers had been blossoming.

Kevin C (155) said...

Tim and I drove the new shiny-silver car when we were traveling to western Canada. Along the highway we saw the Rocky Mountains, tourist traps, and the blossoming wild flowers; however, we saw few wild animals and not one single bear.

Tanya Byrne said...

I sat in the passenger seat and Tim drove the shiny, new, silver car to Western Canada. Along the way, we saw the Rocky Mountains, wild flowers in bloom, and tourist's traps along the side of the highway. Although, we saw a few wild animals, we did not see any bears.

Michael said...

Good effort, everyone. It looks like you have all missed something, though. Stay tuned for the solution!