This is an exercise in advanced sentence combining.
Sentence 1: It is nice to have a celebration for fathers.
Sentence 2: It is important to recognize the role of both mothers and fathers in society today.
Sentence 2: It is important to recognize the role of both mothers and fathers in society today.
Sentence 3: Many fathers now take a very active role in bringing up their children.
Grammar:
1. Use a gerund to combine the sentences.
2. Use an appositive to combine the sentences.
2. Use a relative pronoun to combine the sentences.
2. Use a relative pronoun to combine the sentences.
2 comments:
It is important to recognize the role of both mothers and fathers in society today, speaking of fathers; many fathers, it is nice to have a celebration for fathers, now take a very active role in bringing up their children.
A good effort, Swood177, but there are a number of problems here.
You have used a comma splice, confused the punctuation, and overlooked the requested grammar items.
Here are some possible answers:
Recognizing the role of both mothers and fathers in society today is important as fathers now take a very active role in bringing up their children and it is nice to have a celebration for them.
It is nice to have a celebration for fathers, who now take a very active role in bringing up their children, as it is important to recognize the role of both mothers and fathers in society today.
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