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Saturday, July 5, 2014
*COMPLETE THE SENTENCE*
Follow the instructions below to create three different sentences from the following clause.*
... we saw the fireworks on Canada Day...
Sentence 1. Add a phrase Sentence 2. Add a dependent clause Sentence 3. Add an independent clause
*Add your words to the beginning or end of the clause (but not both).
4 comments:
krisla Eng 155
said...
1.We saw the fireworks on Canada Day at dusk. 2. Although we saw the fireworks on Canada Day, we missed a few when we had to comfort our scared puppy. 3. We saw the fireworks on Canada Day at the Marina, the refections from the lights on the water looked nothing less than beautiful.
1.We saw the fireworks on Canada Day at dusk. 2. Although we saw the fireworks on Canada Day, we missed a few when we had to comfort our scared puppy. 3. We saw the fireworks on Canada Day at the Marina, the refections from the lights on the water looked absolutely beautiful.
1. From a distance, we saw the fireworks on Canada Day. 2. We saw the fireworks on Canada Day because we were outside. 3. We were working outside with our neighbors and we saw the fireworks on Canada Day.
4 comments:
1.We saw the fireworks on Canada Day at dusk.
2. Although we saw the fireworks on Canada Day, we missed a few when we had to comfort our scared puppy.
3. We saw the fireworks on Canada Day at the Marina, the refections from the lights on the water looked nothing less than beautiful.
1.We saw the fireworks on Canada Day at dusk.
2. Although we saw the fireworks on Canada Day, we missed a few when we had to comfort our scared puppy.
3. We saw the fireworks on Canada Day at the Marina, the refections from the lights on the water looked absolutely beautiful.
1. From a distance, we saw the fireworks on Canada Day.
2. We saw the fireworks on Canada Day because we were outside.
3. We were working outside with our neighbors and we saw the fireworks on Canada Day.
krisla:
Instead of adding a dependent clause, in your second sentence you made the original clause dependent.
Your third sentence is a comma splice.
Great job, Shoya!
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