Over the next few weekends, we are going to several festivals that are happening in different towns around the province. They will all be short drives as we want to spend our time at the festivals rather than on the roads. At this time of the year, thunderstorms are always possible, but we are hoping that they won’t affect our plans.
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Over the next weekend,I am going to a festival that is happening in a different town around the province.
It will be a short drive as I want to spend my time at the festival rather than on the road.
At this time of the year,thunderstorm is possible, but
I hope It won't affect my plan.
Good job, Hedi. But try to notice the content of what you are saying (and not just the number). For instance, what does "a different town around the province" mean? When the phrase becomes singular, it might be better to say something like "another town in the province". Also, you missed an article. Can you spot it?
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