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Thursday, March 5, 2015
*GRAMMAR QUESTION*
Correct the errors in the following sentence:
There were to much peoples at the mall so I was hurried up shopping, I was too hurried that the shirt’s I bought's not big enough and I'm having to return them.
The solution will be posted in the next edition of the blog.
7 comments:
Eugenie C.155
said...
There were too many people at the mall, so I was hurried to shop; I was so hurried that the shirts I bought were not big enough and I had to return them.
There were too many people at the mall so I hurried to finish shopping; I hurried so much that the shirts I bought are too small and I have to return them.
There were too many people at the mall so I hurried to finish up my shopping; I hurried too much that the shirts I bought are too small and now I have to return them.
There were too many people at the mall, so I hurried up with my shopping. I was in such a hurry that the shirts I bought were not big enough and I had to return them.
There were too many people in the mall, so I hurried with my shopping; I was so hurry that the shirts I bought were not big enough, and I will have to return them.
There were to many people at the mall so I rushed my shopping. Because I rushed, the shirts I purchased were not big enough, so I will have to return them.
7 comments:
There were too many people at the mall, so I was hurried to shop; I was so hurried that the shirts I bought were not big enough and I had to return them.
-EugenieC.155
There were too many people at the mall so I hurried to finish shopping; I hurried so much that the shirts I bought are too small and I have to return them.
There were too many people at the mall so I hurried to finish up my shopping; I hurried too much that the shirts I bought are too small and now I have to return them.
There were too many people at the mall, so I hurried up with my shopping. I was in such a hurry that the shirts I bought were not big enough and I had to return them.
There were too many people in the mall, so I hurried with my shopping; I was so hurry that the shirts I bought were not big enough, and I will have to return them.
There were to many people at the mall so I rushed my shopping. Because I rushed, the shirts I purchased were not big enough, so I will have to return them.
I see some good answers here! I will post the full explanation soon.
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