Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.
For instance, if the original sentence is "Benson hurriedly told the bad news to his friends":
participant 1 could write "#1 Subject Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad news to his friends";
participant 2 could then write "#2 Direct Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his friends";
participant 3 could then write "#3 Indirect Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his wife";
etc.
You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.
Participants who make all 7 changes will receive 2 bonus marks for their efforts.
When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.
Here is the sentence:
The judge angrily handed down a long sentence to the unrepentant criminal.
Changes:
1. subject noun
2. direct object noun
3. indirect object noun
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)
6. verb name
7. verb tense
2 comments:
1. subject noun – The jury angrily handed down a long sentence to the unrepentant criminal.
2. direct object noun – The jury angrily handed down a long verdict to the unrepentant criminal.
3. indirect object noun – The jury angrily handed down a long verdict to the unrepentant offender.
4. adjective(s) – The jury angrily handed down a lengthy verdict to the unapologetic offender.
5. adverb(s) – The jury furiously handed down a lengthy verdict to the unapologetic offender.
6. verb name – The jury furiously gave a lengthy verdict to the unapologetic offender.
7. verb tense – The jury furiously gives a lengthy verdict to the unapologetic offender.
Well done! But I don't think you can hand down a long "verdict" -- which is just a decision.
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