Sentence 1: The Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants.
Sentence 2: Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties.
Sentence 3: The loans help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
Sentence 2: Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties.
Sentence 3: The loans help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
2 comments:
The Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants because many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties, so the loans help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, and upgrading.
Really good try, Logan, but I'm not sure that the conjunction "so" accurately conveys the logic of the sentence. Here is a possible solution:
Since many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties, the Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for them, which help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
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