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The little girl grew shy when her mother took her to see Santa at the mall. She was eager to get a present from the bearded man but found the experience frightening, and she was embarrassed when the older boys who lived next door began to tease her about her shyness.
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The little girls grew shy when their mother took them to see Santa at the mall. The girls were eager to get a present from the bearded man but found the epxerience frightening, and they were embarrassed when the older boys who lived next door began to tease them about their shyness.
Good try, Linelle. But I can see a few more places where the plural could have been used. Can you find them?
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