Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the
exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next
change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1
Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object
Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and
keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making
more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that
the previous students make. Please number the change you make.
The avid shopper excitedly gave holiday souvenirs to her friends.
Changes: 1. subject noun 2. direct object noun 3. indirect
object noun
4.
adjective(s) 5. adverb(s) 6.
verb name 7. verb tense
10 comments:
1. Subject noun
The avid client excitedly gave holiday souvenirs to her friends.
The avid client excitedly gave holiday cards to her friends.
ANDREW: yes!
LEIGHA: yes!
3. Indirect object noun
The avid client excitedly gave holiday cards to her bosses.
The appreciative client excitedly gave thank you cards to her bosses.
Robert Smale said.
6. verb name
The appreciative associat excitedly gave thank you cards to her bosses.
LAURIE:yes!
JOCELYN:yes!
ROBERT:You changed the subject noun, not the verb, and you were supposed to change the adverb;-)
NEXT STUDENT, PLEASE MAKE CHANGE #5 TO JOCELYN'S SENTENCE.
5. adverb
The appreciative client apprehensively gave thank you cards to her bosses.
7. Verb tense
The appreciative clients apprehensively gives thank you cards to their bosses
LAURIE: yes
VIVIEN: You needed to make change #6--verb name--and note the problem with subject-verb agreement;-)
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