Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is
an important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible
bonus points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: The Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for
internationally trained immigrants.
Sentence 2: Many immigrant professionals find it hard to
pursue their careers in Canada
because of accreditation difficulties.
Sentence 3: The loans help pay the costs associated with
accreditation, training, or upgrading.
8 comments:
As a result of the costs associated with accreditation, training and upgrading, many immigrant professionals benefit from the Immigrant Access Fund to assist with pursuing their careers in Canada.
Robert S. said.
The Immigrant Access Fund provides professionals immigrants, to find loans to help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading to pursue their careers in Canada.
JOCELYN:Great sentence:-)
ROBERT: Check the wording--something isn't quite making sense here;-)
Tanya F.
To help internationally trained immigrants pursue their careers in Canada the Immigrant Access Fund provides loans to assist with the costs associated with accreditation, training or upgrading.
TANYA: Almost--there's a comma missing;-)
Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties; however, the Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants to help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
The loans, provided by the Immigrant Access Fund, help internationally trained immigrants to pursue their careers in Canada by paying the costs associated with their accreditation, training, or upgrading.
Tanya F.
To help internationally trained immigrants pursue their careers in Canada, the Immigrant Access Fund provides loans to assist with the costs associated with accreditation, training or upgrading.
- Yes, it's true I forgot the comma!
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