Sentence 1: The French were the first Europeans to settle in what is now Canada
Sentence 2: Many of the British who came toCanada went to the New England colonies first.
Sentence 2: Many of the British who came to
Sentence 3: The American War of Independence prompted many Loyalists to leave the colonies and head for Canada
2 comments:
Even though the French were the first Europeans to settle in what is now Canada, many of the British who came to Canada went to the New England colonies first as it was still under British control, but the American War of independence prompted many Loyalists to leave the colonies and head for for Canada.
Good try, krisla, but I'm not sure about the logic that connects the different clauses.
Here's another possibility:
The French were the first Europeans to settle in what is now Canada, for many of the British who came to Canada went to the New England colonies first, before the American War of Independence prompted many Loyalists to leave the colonies and head for Canada as it was still under British control.
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