Friday, October 31, 2014

*GRAMMAR QUESTION*

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

Not only you and you’re brother’s, but also your sister’s needs altaring there plans and  being home early: too clean a house preparing for our dinner’s  party and you will have to make the appetizers instead of laying on the couch for watching TV .

Solutions will be posted in the next edition of the blog.

4 comments:

Sofia M, ENGL189 said...

Not only you and your brothers, but also your sisters need to alter your plans and be home early: to clean the house in preparation for dinner, and to make the appetizers instead of laying on the couch watching TV.

Sarah K ENGL 155 said...

Not only you but your brothers and sisters need to alter your plans and be home early,to clean the house and make appetizers in preparation for the dinner party,instead of lying on the couch watching TV.

lisaca59 said...

Not only you, but your brother and sister, need to alter your plans and be home early to clean the house and make the appetizers to prepare for our dinner party instead of laying on the couch and watching TV.

Michael said...

Good try!

But I still see a few errors.

I'll post a full explanation soon.