Sentence 1: Many people attended Remembrance Day ceremonies on Nov. 11th.
United States
Sentence 3: Many people wear poppies to commemorate the flowers that grew in many World War I battlefields.
3 comments:
Many people wear poppies to commemorate the flowers that grew in many World War I battlefields and attend Remembrance Day ceremonies on November 11th, which is called Veteran's Day in the United States.
Many people attended the Remembrance Day ceremonies on November 11,and wear the poppies to commemorate the flowers that grew on many World War I battlefields; however in the United States, November 11th is called Veterans Day.
Great effort!
Sarah, I'm not sure about the logic of "however" in this sentence. But if you use it, remember to put a comma after it.
Lisa, watch your relative pronoun use. In your sentence, "which" seems to refer to "ceremonies", and I don't think that's what you want.
Here is another possible solution:
Many people wear poppies to commemorate the flowers that grew in World War I battlefields and, on November 11th, many attended ceremonies for Remembrance Day, which is called Veteran's Day in the United States.
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