Sentence 1: Many people in Canada are looking forward to spring.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long a long winter.
Sentence 3: This winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many places.
Sentence 3: This winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many places.
2 comments:
Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter, so many people in Canada are looking forward to spring; unfortunately, this winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many places.
Well done, Eugenie. But I wonder if you could come up with a sentence that doesn't rely on a semi-colon to join the clause.
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