Thursday, February 4, 2016

*ALL CHANGE!*

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated.

Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.

For instance, if the original sentence is "Benson hurriedly told the bad news to his friends":


participant 1 could write "#1 Subject Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad news to his friends";


participant 2 could then write "#2 Direct Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his friends";


participant 3 could then write "#3 Indirect Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his wife";

etc.


You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.


Participants who make all 7 changes will receive 2 bonus marks for their efforts.

When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.


Here is the sentence:


The doctor happily told us the good news about our friend in the hospital.

Changes:                                                                                                                          

1. subject noun

2. direct object noun          
3. indirect object noun                  
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)    
6. verb name      
7. verb tense

5 comments:

Unknown said...

Dr Seuss happily told us the good news about our friend in the hospital.

The Berg said...
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The Berg said...

1. The nurse happily told us the good news about our friend in the hospital
2. The nurse happily told us the good information about our friend in the hospital.
3. The nurse happily told us the good information about our uncle in the hospital.
4. The nurse happily told us the great information about our uncle in the hospital.
5. The nurse joyously told us the great information about our uncle in the hospital.
6. The nurse joyously divulged to us the great information about our uncle in the hospital.
7. The nurse may joyously divulge to us the great information about our uncle in the hospital.

Michael said...

Well done!

But next time don't forget to indicate which part of speech you changed in each sentence.

Unknown said...

The doctor happily told us the good news about our friend in the hospital.

#1. The nurse happily told us the good news about our friend in the hopsital.
#2. The Doctor sadly told us the bad news about our friend in the hospital
#3. Dr. Blue happily told us the joyus news about our friend in the hospital.
#4. The nurse happily told us the exciting news about our mother in the hospital.
$5. The Dr. angerly told us the upsetting news about our cousin in the hospital.
#6. The specialist happily told us exciting news about our friend in the hospital.
#7. The nurse happily told us the good progress about our cousin in the hopsital

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