Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.
For instance, if the original sentence is "Benson hurriedly told the bad news to his friends":
participant 1 could write "#1 Subject Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad news to his friends";
participant 2 could then write "#2 Direct Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his friends";
participant 3 could then write "#3 Indirect Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his wife";
etc.
You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.
Participants who make all 7 changes will receive 2 bonus marks for their efforts.
When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list, but keep building on the changes made by the previous participant.
Here is the sentence:
Mitsuko happily gave her loving husband an expensive birthday gift .
Changes:
1. subject noun
2. direct object noun
3. indirect object noun
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)
6. verb name
7. verb tense
3 comments:
1.subject noun- Sara happily gave her loving husband an expensive birthday gift.
2.direct object noun-Sara happily gave her loving son an expensive birthday gift.
3.indirect object-Sara happily gave her loving son an expensive watch.
4.adjectives - Sara happily gave her only son a pricey watch.
5.adverbs - Sara readily gave her only son a pricey watch.
6.verb name - Sara readily bought her only son a pricey watch.
7.verb tense - Sara readily buys her only son a pricey watch.
Mitsuko happily gave her loving husband an expensive birthday gift .
Changes:
1. subject noun: Stephanie happily gave her loving husband an expensive birthday gift.
2. direct object noun: Stephanie happily gave her loving sister an expensive birthday gift.
3. indirect object noun: Stephanie happily gave her loving sister an expensive present.
4. adjective(s): Stephanie happily gave her caring sister an expensive present.
5. adverb(s): Stephanie joyfully gave her caring sister an expensive present.
6. verb name: Stephanie joyfully gifted her caring sister an expensive present.
7. verb tense: Stephanie joyfully will gift her caring sister an expensive present.
Good try, Logan. But you have confused the direct and indirect object.
http://www.write.com/writing-guides/general-writing/grammar/direct-and-indirect-objects/
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