Sentence 1: Joane is a graduate of Athabasca University.
Sentence 2: Joane was recently hired by a major corporation.
Sentence 3: She will be lead their international unit.
Sentence 2: Joane was recently hired by a major corporation.
Sentence 3: She will be lead their international unit.
2 comments:
Joane is a graduate of Athabasca University who has just recently been hired by a major corporation, where she will lead its international unit.
Well done!
Here is another possibility (which uses an appositive and an infinitive):
"Joane, a graduate of Athabasca University, was recently hired by a major corporation to lead its international unit."
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