Thursday, January 3, 2013

ALL CHANGE, Jan. 3rd, 2013

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student  makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. 
Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

In January, people often resolve to give more money to charity .

Changes: #1 Subject noun      #2  Direct object noun       #3 Indirect object noun   
#4 Adjective     #5 Adverb     #6 Verb name      #7 Verb tense

PLEASE NUMBER THE CHANGE THAT YOU MAKE.

20 comments:

Unknown said...

#1. Subject noun

In January, citizens often resolve to give more money to charity .

Justine said...

#2 Direct Object Noun
In January, citizens often resolve to give more cash to charity.

Veronica Baig said...

ANDREW:yes!
JUSTINE: yes!

Sarah A said...

#3. Indirect Object Noun

In January, citizens often resolve to give more cash to an aid organization.

Alesha B said...

In January, citizens often resolve to give more cash to an charity organization.

Veronica Baig said...

SARAH:yes!
ALESHA: yes, but take another look at the answer for a grammatical error;-)

Sarah A said...

#5 Adverb

In January, citizens frequently resolve to give more cash to an aid organization.

Beatrice L said...

#4 Adjective

In January,thoughtful citizens frequently resolve to give more cash to an aid organization.

Veronica Baig said...

SARAH: yes!
BEATRICE: you added an adjective, but you were supposed to make change #6!
NEXT STUDENT: PLEASE MAKE CHANGE #6.

JanieC said...

#6 Verb name
In January, citizens frequently decide to donate more cash to an aid organization.

Veronica Baig said...

JANIE: yes!

Anonymous said...

In January, citizens frequently decided to donate more cash to an aid organization.

Stephanie said...

In January, citizens frequently decided to donate more cash to an aid organization.

Alesha B said...

In January, residents frequently decided to donate more cash to an aid organization.

JanieC said...

#2 Direct object noun
In January, residents frequently decided to donate more books to an aid organization.

Jennifer H said...

#3 indirect object noun

In January, citizens often resolve to give more cash to a charitable foundation.

Veronica Baig said...

STEPHANIE: yes!
ALESHA:yes!
JANIE:yes!
JENNIFER:yes!

ShelleyM155 said...

#4 Adjective
In January,citizens often resolve to give more cash to nonprofit organization.







Alesha B said...

In January, citizens usually resolve to give more cash to nonprofit organization.

Veronica Baig said...

SHELLEY:yes!
ALESHA: yes!