There are a number of grammatical errors in the following
sentence. Rewrite the sentence to correct for those errors. There are many
possible solutions.
Studying on my own pace is a lot of benefit for me do to I
am not needing to be worrying about no time for attend class. Being a single parent, the classes allows me working and studying and to spend time with my children.
17 comments:
It is beneficial for me, as a single parent, to study on my own, because it allows me to study around my work schedule and my time with my children.
Studying at my own pace provides many benefits for me. I don't need to worry about making time to attend classes. Being a single parent, these clases allow me to work, study and spend time with my children.
Studying on my own pace is beneficial for me, as I do not need to worry about finding time to attend class; furthermore, being a single parent, it allows me to have not only sufficient working and studying time but also to have time to spend with my children.
Being a single parent, studing at my own pace is beneficial because I do not have to worry about working, studing and spending time with my children
Since this class allows me to study at my own pace, I find time management less stressful since class time is not scheduled. Being a single parent, I find the class allows me to work, study, and spend time with my children.
Studying at my own pace is beneficial for me, because I don't need to worry about being on time for class. Being a single parent, my classes allow me to work,study, and spend time with my children.
Studying at my own pace has many benefits for me as I do not worry about finding time to attend class. Since I am a single parent, the classes allow me to work, study, and spend time with my children.
MARY ANN: A good solution;-)
NICOLE:Nicely done!
GRACE:Almost--there's a small wording error;-)
VIVIEN:You need to think about a dangling modifier;-)
LESLIE:Well done:-)
ALYCIA:There are 2 things to think about--a dangling modifier and punctuation;-)
JENNIFER:A good answer:-)
It is beneficial for me, as a single parent, to study at my own pace; I can continue to work while I study, and still have time to spend with my children.
Studying at my own pace is beneficial for me, as I do not need to worry about finding time to attend class; furthermore, being a single parent, it allows me to have not only sufficient working and studying time but also to have time to spend with my children.
AS a single parent, I find studying at my own pace beneficial as I am not worrying about attending classes. The flexibility allows me to work, study and spend time with my children.
As a single parent, studying at my own pace has a lot of benefits, such as the following: I don't need to worry about finding time to attend classes, and I have more time to spend with my children.
LEIGHA: Almost--there's a comma error;-)
GRACE: Thank you!
JOCELYN:Excellent solution:-)
SERENA: Well done!
As a single parent, studying on my own and not having to attend class, allows me to work, study, and spend time with my children.
JOEL: That response I very brief--you omit some information as a result; also note that there is a punctuation error;-)
It is beneficial for me, as a single parent, to study at my own pace; I can continue to work while I study and still have time to spend with my children.
LEIGHA: Great !
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