Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an
important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible bonus
points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in such a cold country where most people experience a very long winter.
Sentence 3: This winter has seemed longer than most with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country.
18 comments:
Although many people in Canada look forward to spring after a long cold winter, this winter seems longer than most because the snow still on the ground in many part of the country.
This winter has seemed longer than most and most are already very long, many people in Canada particulary appreciate the spring time and look forward to it, living in such a cold country, but there is still snow on the ground in many parts.
Many people, in Canada, are looking forward to appreciating spring after experiencing a very long winter; nevertheless, we still have snow on the ground in many areas.
Many people in Canada are looking forward to spring, because this winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country; therefore, spring is particularly appreciated in such a cold country where most people experience a very long winter.
Canadians experience long, cold winters and with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country; many are looking forward to spring.
MARY ANN:Almost--you're missing a verb;-)
NICOLE:Close--check the punctuation;-)
LESLIE:Check punctuation and rethink your use of "nevertheless"--it's not the best transition here;-)
ALYCIA:You need to check the punctuation, and this version is a little long-winder;-)
JOCELYN: Close--check the punctuation;-)
Canadians experience long, cold winters, and with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country, many are looking forward to spring.
Although many people in Canada look forward to spring after a long cold winter, this winter seems longer than most because the snow is still on the ground in many part of the country.
Spring is particular appreciated in a cold country such as Canada where most people experience long winters however, this winter seemed longer then most with snow still on the round in many parts of the country
In Canada, a country where the winters are long and cold, many people look forward to Spring; however, this winter seems longer than most because there is still snow on the ground in many parts of the country.
JOCELYN: thank you!
MARY ANN:Yes, you've fixed that, but I've just noticed a problem with one other word;-)
VIVIEN:Close--you have a word form error and you need to check the punctuation;-)
LEIGHA:Very close--there is a capitalization error;-)
Since Canada is so cold and has had a very long winter with lasting snow, many people are looking forward to spring.
Canadians are looking forward to spring, as this winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country; therefore, spring is appreciated in such a cold country,especially where most people experience a very long winter.
In Canada, a country where the winters are long and cold, many people look forward to spring; however, this winter seems longer than most because there is still snow on the ground in many parts of the country.
Many Canadians are looking forward to spring after a longer and colder winter that may be attributed to greater snowfall in many parts of the country.
JOEL: What you have written is good, but you are missing one of the original ideas;-)
ALYCIA:Verbose but good:-)
LEIGHA:Thank you:-)
JENNIFER H: Grammatically correct, but you have changed the original ideas, and it's not necessarily factually true;-)
Although many people in Canada look forward to spring after a long cold winter, this winter seems longer than most because the snow is still on the ground in many parts of the country.
MARY ANN: thank you!
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