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Friday, November 15, 2013
SENTENCE COMBINATION
Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important writing skill. There are many ways to do this. Try to combine the following three sentences. Sentence 1: We went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Santa. Sentence 2: There was a parade through the mall in honour of Santa’s arrival. Sentence 3: By the time we got there, the mall was very crowded.
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We went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Santa; there was a parade through the mall in honour of his his arrival, so by the time we got there, the mall was very crowded.
There was a parade through the mall in honour of Santa’s arrival; therefore, we went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Santa, but by the time we got there, the mall was very crowded.
On Saturday, we went to the mall so that the children could see Santa; however, by the time we got there, the mall was very crowded because of a parade in honour of Santa's arrival.
4 comments:
We went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Santa; there was a parade through the mall in honour of his his arrival, so by the time we got there, the mall was very crowded.
There was a parade through the mall in honour of Santa’s arrival; therefore, we went to the mall on Saturday so that the children could see Santa, but by the time we got there, the mall was very crowded.
On Saturday, we went to the mall so that the children could see Santa; however, by the time we got there, the mall was very crowded because of a parade in honour of Santa's arrival.
Excellent!
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