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1. Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday to have breakfast with the kids.2. Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday after being in the parade.3. Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday. I can't believe Christmas is approaching so quickly!
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday over a half hour late.Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday after we finish shopping.Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday; the kids were so excited to see him.
Sarah, #3 is actually two sentences!Yousa, #3 is technically one sentence, but it would be clearer if you used a conjunction.
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1. Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday to have breakfast with the kids.
2. Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday after being in the parade.
3. Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday. I can't believe Christmas is approaching so quickly!
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday over a half hour late.
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday after we finish shopping.
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday; the kids were so excited to see him.
Sarah, #3 is actually two sentences!
Yousa, #3 is technically one sentence, but it would be clearer if you used a conjunction.
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