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Friday, February 14, 2014
*GRAMMAR QUESTION*
Correct the errors in the following sentence:
As the matter of fact, she was a person who hard being convinced for instant, she certainly would likes to thinks that his opinion are the corrected then any one else view.
Solutions will be posted in the next edition of the blog.
8 comments:
Sarahba50 (155)
said...
As a matter of fact, she was a person who was hard to convince; for instance, she certainly liked to think her opinions were more correct than anyone else's view.
As a matter of fact, she was a person that was hard to convince; for instance, she certainly thought that her opinions were more correct than other people's views.
As the matter of fact, she certainly would like to think that his opinion are more corrected than anyone else; furthermore, she was a person who was hard to be convinced.
As a matter of fact, she was a person who was hard to convince, for instance, she certainly liked to think her opinions were better than anyone's view.
As a matter of fact, she was a person who was hard to convince; for instance, she would like us all to think that her opinion is better than anyone else's opinion.
8 comments:
As a matter of fact, she was a person who was hard to convince; for instance, she certainly liked to think her opinions were more correct than anyone else's view.
Nice job, Sarah!
As a matter of fact, she was a person that was hard to convince; for instance, she certainly thought that her opinions were more correct than other people's views.
As the matter of fact, she certainly would like to think that his opinion are more corrected than anyone else; furthermore, she was a person who was hard to be convinced.
As a matter of fact, she was a person very hard to convince; moreover, she believed her opinions to be more correct than all others.
As a matter of fact, she was a person who was hard to convince, for instance, she certainly liked to think her opinions were better than anyone's view.
As a matter of fact, she was a person who was hard to convince; for instance, she would like us all to think that her opinion is better than anyone else's opinion.
Yes, well done, Sarah!
And those are other possibilities, Jess and Madicynn
Alexandra: remember to use "who" rather than "that" when referring to people.
Roland: still lots of problems with your answer!
Peggy: watch out for the comma splice!
Full solution coming soon!
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