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Friday, February 28, 2014
*GRAMMAR QUESTION*
Correct the errors in the following sentence:
Less people in Canada are planning travelling over this year because of the worse weather that happened in to many parts of the country recently and because it is expensive.
Solutions will be posted in the next edition of the blog.
5 comments:
Jess #ENGL155
said...
High costs have deterred Canadians from making as many travel plans this year, additionally; the extreme weather that has impacted many parts of the county recently has not been encouraging to the planning process.
Good effort, everyone. But keep in mind that this is an exercise in editing, not rewriting. You should try to correct the errors without changing the structure. I will post the solution soon.
Less people in Canada are planning to travel this year, because of the worsening weather that has happening in to many parts of the country recently, and because it is expensive.
5 comments:
High costs have deterred Canadians from making as many travel plans this year, additionally; the extreme weather that has impacted many parts of the county recently has not been encouraging to the planning process.
This year in Canada, people are planning to travel less because of the expense and recent bad weather in many parts of the country.
Good effort, everyone. But keep in mind that this is an exercise in editing, not rewriting. You should try to correct the errors without changing the structure. I will post the solution soon.
Less people in Canada are planning to travel this year, because of the worsening weather that has happening in to many parts of the country recently, and because it is expensive.
Good try, kris, but you missed some errors, too.
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