The little girl grew shy when her mother took her to see Santa at the mall. She was eager to get a present from the bearded man but found the experience frightening, and she was embarrassed when the older boys who lived next door began to tease her about her shyness.
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The little girls grew shy when their mothers took them to see the Santas at the malls. They were eager to get presents from the bearded men but found the experiences frightening, and they were embarrassed when the older boy who lived next door began to tease them about their shyness.
The little girls grow shy when their mothers take them to see Santa at the mall. They were eager to get presents from the bearded man but found the experience frightening, and they were embarrassed when the older boy who live next door begins to tease them about their shyness.
Well done, Lisa!
Good try, Sarah. But watch out for typos and unnecessary verb shifts.
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