Thursday, November 13, 2014

*TIME CHANGE*

Change the time in the following sentences by using a different verb tense and replacing any necessary time clues. Each student should choose a different verb tense.

This coming Saturday, I will take my daughter to the mall to see Santa for the first time. I expect she will be nervous about sitting next to the old gentleman with his big, bushy beard and  hearty laugh. However, she may surprise me and embrace the idea when she realizes that she will get a gift at the end. I hope she stays happy so we can get a nice, smiling photo of her when the photographer takes her picture.

3 comments:

Sarah K ENGL 155 said...

On Saturday, I took my daughter to the mall to see Santa for the first time. I expect she would be nervous when she sat next to the old gentleman that had a big,bushy beard and hearty laugh. However, she surprised me and embraced the idea when she realized that she would get a gift in the end. I had hoped she would stay happy so we would get a nice, smiling photo of her when the photographer took her picture.

lisaca59 said...

Today I am taking my daughter to the mall to see Santa for the first time. I expect she is nervous about sitting next to the old gentleman with his big, bushy beard and hearty laugh. However, she is surprising me and is embracing the idea as she is realizes she is getting a gift at the end. I am hoping she stays happy so we get a nice, smiling photo of her from the photographer who is taking her picture.

Michael said...

Good try!

But there are some errors in both answers. Have a closer look and see if you can spot them.