The first participant to make the correct changes will receive the bonus mark.
The baseball players were anxiously waiting for the games to start, but they were also nervous because they knew that a scout from the major league was there, and every player wanted to make a good impression.
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The baseball player was anxiously waiting for the games to start, but he was also nervous because he knew that a scout from the major league was there, and every player wanted to make a good impression.
The baseball player was anxiously waiting for the game to start, but he was also nervous because he knew that a scout from the major league was there, and he wanted to make a good impression.
The baseball player was anxiously waiting for the game to start, but he/she was also nervous because he/she knew that scouts from the major leagues were there, and many players wanted to make good impressions.
Good. Jacquelyn answered first, but Fatuma found more changes -- so I will award half a point to each of you.
Fatuma, note that "he/she" is rather poor style. In this case, it would have been better to choose one pronoun or the other.
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