Sentence 1: Canada Day fell on a Friday this year.
Sentence 2: The fireworks display was spectacular, but it started very late because of the long daylight hours.
Sentence 3: The July 1st holiday was a great way to start the new month.
Sentence 2: The fireworks display was spectacular, but it started very late because of the long daylight hours.
Sentence 3: The July 1st holiday was a great way to start the new month.
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The July 1st holiday, Canada Day, fell on a Friday this year and the spectacular fireworks display, despite starting very late because of the long daylight hours, was a great way to start the new month.
The July 1st holiday, Canada Day, fell on a Friday this year, which was a great way to start the new month, and the fireworks display was spectacular, but it started very late because of the long daylight hours.
Well done, both of you!
But, Janis, don't forget to insert a comma after the coordinating conjunction ("and") when adding a dependent clause.
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