Friday, January 18, 2013

ALL CHANGE! Jan. 18th, 2013

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.Please number the change that you make.

My friend quickly bought new clothes in the sales this month. 

Changes: #1 Subject noun        #2  Direct object noun          #3 Indirect object noun          
 #4 Adjective               #5 Adverb                  #6 Verb name              #7 Verb tense

16 comments:

Alesha B said...

#1 subject noun

My sister quickly bought new clothes in the sales this month.

Sarah A said...

2. Direct Object Noun

My sister quickly bought new outfits in the sales this month.

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Unknown said...

3. Indirect Object Noun

My sister quickly bought new outfits in the sales this year.

Serena R (Eng 155) said...

4. Adjective


Our sister quickly bought new outfits in the sales this year.

Beatrice L said...

5 #Adverb
Our sister methodically bought new
outfits in the sales this year.

Veronica Baig said...

ALESHA:yes!
SARAH:yes!
ANDREW: that's not the indirect object:-(
SERENA:OK--that's a possessive adjective, but it's usually treated as a pronoun. Can you find the other adjective?
BEATRICE: yes!

Jeffrey155 said...

#6 Verb name
Our sister methodically designs new
outfits in the sales this year.

Justine said...

#7 Verb Tense

Our sister will methodically design new outfits in the sales this year.

Alesha B said...

#1 subject noun
Our associate will methodically design new outfits in the sales this year.

Veronica Baig said...

JEFFREY:yes!
JUSTINE: yes!
ALESHA: yes!

Jennifer H said...

2#

Our associate will methodically design a new line of costumes in the sales this year.

Veronica Baig said...

JENNIFER:yes--to the first one! I don't know what you're doing in the second one--I've deleted it to avoid confusion;-)

Alesha b said...

#3
Our associate will methodically design a new line of costumes in the sales this season.

Veronica Baig said...

ALESHA: Sorry--that's not the indirect object:-(

Stephanie said...

#4- Adjective
Our associate will methodically design an experimental line of costumes in the sales this year.