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Many young children eagerly rang doorbells in all the neighbourhoods on Halloween while their parents stood shivering in the cold on sidewalks or sat in cars parked at strategic locations watching their children.
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Watching his child from the sidewalk on Halloween, a man stood shivering in the cold while his young child eagerly rang a doorbell in the neighbourhood.
One young child eagerly rang a doorbell in the block on Halloween while his father stood shivering in the cold on sidewalk and his uncle sat in the car parked at a strategic location watching his child.
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