On Halloween, when I took my two-year old son trick or treating, at first he didn’t know what to make of the activity. We were with neighbours and their young children, but by the time we reached the third house on our route, he had it figured out. My little ghost ran up to the house before all of the bigger kids and rang the doorbell.
Change the time of this paragraph – you will need to change the verb tense and any time clues. Each participant should choose a different time change and verb tense.
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On Halloween, when I take my two-year old son trick or treating, at first he will not know what to make of the activity. We will be with neighbours and their young children, but by the time we reach the third house on our route, he will have had it figured out. My little ghost will run up to the house before all of the bigger kids and will ring the doorbell.
Ok! We already have past tense and future tense -- I guess I'll try the present tense.
It's Halloween and I am trick-or-treating with my two-year old son. We are with neighbours and their young children at the third house on our route. At first, my son didn't know what to make of the activity, but now he has it figured out; my little ghost is running up to the house (before all the bigger kids) ringing the doorbell!
Very nice!
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