The avid gardener waited impatiently for spring to arrive so she could plant her flowers.
For instance, Participant 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Participant 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes the direct object noun, etc.
Normally, I request that each participant make just one change at a time, following the order indicated below. But I don't remember the last time we actually made it to the end of the list, let alone started again from the top, so this time you are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.
When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.
Changes:
1. subject noun
2. direct object noun
3. indirect object noun
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)
6. verb name
7. verb tense
5 comments:
1. Subject noun
The avid florist waited impatiently for spring to arrive so she could plant her flowers.
2. direct object noun
The avid florist waited impatiently for package to arrive so she could plant her flowers.
Well done. But don't forget to include the article ("a") before the countable noun, restless.
Michael, do you mean before 'package'? It's one of my biggest issues to know where to put articles! Don't have have in my first language... Hope to improve with your corrections!
restless: that's right. As you improve your English, you will begin to recognize when an article is needed, and then you will develop a sense of whether to use the definite article ("the") or the indefinite one ("a"); either can be used here, depending on your meaning.
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