I'm excited about the future, not the present. I'm excited about the future, except it can be scary. This has been such a hard year, but I'm excited about the future.
I am excited for the future, as life can only be lived forward. I am excited for the future as your new wife. I am excited for the future, we have lots of plans to look forward too.
Good try, Logan, but your second sentence seems to add an independent clause. Taylor, your first sentence adds a dependent clause, your second sentence adds a phrase, and your third sentence uses a comma splice.
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I'm excited about the future, not the present.
I'm excited about the future, except it can be scary.
This has been such a hard year, but I'm excited about the future.
I am excited for the future, as life can only be lived forward.
I am excited for the future as your new wife.
I am excited for the future, we have lots of plans to look forward too.
ENG 155 Taylor J
Good try, Logan, but your second sentence seems to add an independent clause.
Taylor, your first sentence adds a dependent clause, your second sentence adds a phrase, and your third sentence uses a comma splice.
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