Friday, September 30, 2016

*ALL CHANGE!*

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated.

Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.

For instance, if the original sentence is "Benson hurriedly told the bad news to his friends":


participant 1 could write "#1 Subject Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad news to his friends";


participant 2 could then write "#2 Direct Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his friends";


participant 3 could then write "#3 Indirect Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his wife";

etc.


You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.


Participants who make all 7 changes will receive 2 bonus marks for their efforts.

When all 7 changes have been made, do not repeat
 the original sentence; return to the top of the list, but keep building on the changes made by the previous participant.

Here is the sentence:


My new accountant kindly offered me some financial advice.

Changes:                                                                                                                          

1. subject noun

2. direct object noun          
3. indirect object noun                  
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)    
6. verb name      
7. verb tense

2 comments:

Daryl Schaeffer said...

1. subject noun: My new advisor kindly offered me some financial advice.
2. direct object noun: My new advisor kindly offered my friend some financial advice.
3. indirect object noun: My new advisor kindly offered my friend some financial suggestions.
4. adjective(s): My regular advisor kindly offered my friend some banking suggestions.
5. adverb(s): My regular advisor curtly offered my friend some banking suggestions.
6. verb name: My regular advisor curtly gave my friend some banking suggestions.
7. verb tense: My regular advisor is curtly giving my friend some banking suggestions.

Michael said...

Good effort, Daryl, but you have confused the direct and indirect object. This is something you might want to review.