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The sky is blue with a few clouds.I love it when the sky is blue.The sky is blue and the sun is warm.
Good job, Daryl. But note that instead of adding a dependent clause in your second sentence, you subordinated the original clause and added an independent clause. It's a small but important difference.
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The sky is blue with a few clouds.
I love it when the sky is blue.
The sky is blue and the sun is warm.
Good job, Daryl. But note that instead of adding a dependent clause in your second sentence, you subordinated the original clause and added an independent clause. It's a small but important difference.
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